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About Me Member Fantasy Artist Scarletfrost23/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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When I grow up, I wanna be famous! I wanna be a star! I wanna be in movies! I wanna enchant kingdoms, turn into a dragon, command legions of goblins!

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  • Interests: Creative Writing, Animals
  • Tools of the Trade: Water colors, gouashe, pencils, ink

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I'm a writer first, then an artist. I'm working on publishing my first book, Goblin Hunters. You'll see character sketches for the stories here.

I'm also a wife and mother, which makes me OLD!!! At least, I feel old compared to all my single and DINK friends. >_<

I take requests, commissions, and C&C. Please leave comments when you fav something--I love reading them.

Book Review: Bitter Dissapointment

Thu Nov 12, 2009, 10:24 AM
Warning: Some spoilers may be inferred from this rant, but if you're a Classic Carpathian Addict like I am, you may just dodge an $8 bullet.

I read Christine Feehan's Dark Possession last night, and I have to say that I am sorely disappointed in that book. Firstly, the whole voice of the narration doesn't sound like Ms. Feehan at all. Secondly, the Carpathian males are falling prey to contractions. I'll. Can't. Don't. You're. It's totally OOC for them! Thirdly, the leading lady admitted durring a secondary roll in Dark Destiny that she had the some-what psychic ability to tell when people are lying, but in DP, MaryAnn professes never to have had any psychic power what so ever. Fourthly, I could never tell if MaryAnn was black, white, native, Heinz 57, or from outer space. Fifthly, Rafael and Colby, who allegedly were on the ranch the whole time, didn't talk to Manalito or join his brother Riordan in taking down a vampire who'd corrupted the Jaguar people. I mean, usually all the De La Cruz brothers get together for any excuse to put the hurt on the vampire, but this time, they were all absent, save for one Imperious Command from Zacharias. And for a sixth thing, why would Zacharias order the conversion of a MALE Jaguar? I mean honestly, you don't convert males because there is no guarantee they will find a lifemate, and without the before-birth-imprinting all the carpathian males get, how would they even know things like the ritual binding words? The guy was totally ready to die, too. He didn't need to be saved. The last you hear of him in the story is that he goes to ground to heal. Nothing else. Number 7, there was waaaaaay too much Purgatory-knockoff spirituality going on, which was poorly explained and really had no place in any previous Carpathian mythology. It was so generic that it was unpleasant and boring.

All in all, this book read like a bad fanfic. I really wouldn't be surprised if Ms. Feehan had a ghost writer for this one--and a cheap one at that. To which I can only say: "Why not hire me?"

  • Mood: Alienated
  • Reading: Not another Dark book for a while
  • Drinking: Coffee!

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:iconlusc-fire:
thanks for the fav

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:iconscarletfrost:
Awesome job on the Princess. ^_^
:iconmarinamoon:
Hi,
Thank you so very much for adding my photo "Metal Horse Sculpture" to your fav's. I appreciate this.

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:iconscarletfrost:
You're such an awesome artist it was my pleasure. I love horses. :dance:
:iconmarinamoon:
Thank you. I feel the same.

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Thanks for the :+fav:!

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:iconmordaunt:
Thanks for watch! Sorry for being late!>.<
...Again.XD :heart:

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:iconscarletfrost:
Better late than never, but I wouldn't hold it against you anyway. ^_^ I love your watercolor skills.
:iconlaoan:
Thanks for the fav.

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:iconmoneshine:
thanx for the fave!!!!!! :iconmonkeydanceplz:

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:icondeathdealertsunade:
Thanks kindly for the fav! (^^) Much appreciated!

Have a beautiful day! :heart:

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:iconscarletfrost:
No problem. You're such an awesome artist! :glomp:
:icontarotshama:
Thanks for all the faves :)

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:iconderamis:
Hi! Thanks for the favs :D

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:iconscarletfrost:
Thanks for the awesome Labyrinth art! :glomp:
:iconlonelynightmares:
Thanks for the fav! :hug:

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:iconscarletfrost:
No problem--you're awesome! :glomp:
:iconangeldess:
thank you so very much for the :+fav:

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:iconforestina:
A belated thank you for the fave and the watch! :hug:

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:iconjusteline:
:icongwompplz: that was a belated thank you for the :+fav: Scarlet! Really glad you liked my -not so- recent work! :iconcocoloveplz:

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:iconscarletfrost:
No problem! ^_^ You're awesome then and now!
:iconwildbrumby:
thanks for the faves ^_^

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:iconmissb048:
Ok,ahha, I know that this is 'off the wall'. I wanted to know if you know anywhere I can buy a camouflage dress... ha. I'm sorry but I have looked everywhere. I can find it anywhere.
:iconscarletfrost:
Um...Hot Topic? Or you can make one for relatively cheap, if you have a sewing machine. I've had a lot of sewing experience if you want to compensate me for a dress. ;)

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